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One of the interesting apps I use is gpay It is a quite advanced program..used by millions of people. The interesting fact is that..you can transfer money from anywhere.. One person to another person. You don’t need to travel to a bank. It’s an interesting thing that google came up. There was a lot of buzz on news articles, importance, shortcomings of this app. Interconnected with other apps. We keep a lot of data about client organisation; in future this could be threatened and could be a problem for a lot of people. There are measures..enforced to follow it.

One of the interesting apps I use is gpay It is a quite advanced program. . used by millions of people. The interesting fact is that. . you can transfer money from anywhere. . One person to another person. You don’t need to travel to a bank. It’s an interesting thing that google came up. There was a lot of buzz on news articles, importance, shortcomings of this app. Interconnected with other apps. We keep a lot of data about client organisation; in future this could be threatened and could be a problem for a lot of people. There are measures. . enforced to follow it. Q2e1L
While I agree that the ministry is responsible for a nation's development by funding the universities which in turn could provide free knowledge but it is also a fact that it can cost a lot. Thus, I believe that the opulent societies should come forward to assist the communities which are facing lack of education, job or money and as a responsible citizen we could avoid this shortcoming easily. While I agree that the ministry is responsible for a nation's development by funding the universities which in turn could provide free knowledge but it is also a fact that it can cost a lot. Thus, I believe that the opulent societies should come forward to assist the communities which are facing lack of education, job or money and as a responsible citizen we could avoid this shortcoming easily.
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for a nation's development by funding the universities which in turn could provide free knowledge
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a fact that it can cost a lot.
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, I believe that the opulent societies should
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come
forward to assist the communities which are facing lack of education, job or money and as a
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responsible
citizen we could avoid this shortcoming
easily
.

While I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that the ministry is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsible
for a nation's development by funding the universities which in turn could provide free knowledge
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
also
a fact that it can cost a lot.
Thus
, I believe that the opulent societies should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
forward to assist the communities which are facing lack of education, job or money and as a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsible
citizen we could avoid this shortcoming
easily
.
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IELTS essay One of the interesting apps I use is gpay It is a quite advanced program. . used by millions of people. The interesting fact is that. . you can transfer money from anywhere. . One person to another person. You don’t need to travel to a bank. It’s an interesting thing that google came up. There was a lot of buzz on news articles, importance, shortcomings of this app. Interconnected with other apps. We keep a lot of data about client organisation; in future this could be threatened and could be a problem for a lot of people. There are measures. . enforced to follow it.

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