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Imagine that you are a top executive of a drilling company that uses fracking to extract natural gas from shale rock. A reporter from a local news channel wants to interview you about fracking. She says, “Fracking has been shown to cause cancer and poses many risks to residents.” What is your response?

Imagine that you are a top executive of a drilling company that uses fracking to extract natural gas from shale rock. A reporter from a local news channel wants to interview you about fracking. She says, “Fracking has been shown to cause cancer and poses many risks to residents. ” What is your response? gWdN3
We deeply apologize to the residents for disturbing you. However, our work is legal and we believe that we made a great contribution to the economic development of the country. In addition to that, recently, scientists are studying ways to frack more safely. Some of the researchers argued that pollution associated with this gas comes from poor management of gas production wells or of wastewater. Hope you have been updated with accurate information on this issue and understand for us.
We
deeply
apologize to the residents for disturbing you.
However
, our work is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
legal and
we believe that we made a great contribution to the economic development of the country.
In addition
to that, recently, scientists are studying ways to frack more
safely
.
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
Some of the
researchers argued that pollution associated with this gas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
from poor management of gas production wells or of wastewater. Hope you have
been updated
with accurate information on this issue and understand for us.
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IELTS essay Imagine that you are a top executive of a drilling company that uses fracking to extract natural gas from shale rock. A reporter from a local news channel wants to interview you about fracking. She says, “Fracking has been shown to cause cancer and poses many risks to residents. ” What is your response?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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