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the disadvantages of new aproach.

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Nowadays, besides the benefits of applying technologies to education, their drawbacks are also significant. Firstly, the presence of technology can be distracting to students. When taking part in online classes, students easily feel tired and ignored from studying. With technology, they can quickly access games and entertainment programs instead of learning. Second, technology can make tests easier to cheat. Along with the development of technology, the applications used to cheat in exams are also becoming more sophisticated. When taking the test, students can transfer these data out or copy others' works. This has a bad effect on the student evaluation process of the teachers. Nevertheless, using technology can cause some students to disconnect from the classroom. Being behind a screen provides students with negative thoughts that they don’t receive attention. This makes students, especially children feel lost and may have psychological problems such as depression, low self-esteem…
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the benefits of applying
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technologies
to education, their drawbacks are
also
significant.
Firstly
, the presence of
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technology
can be distracting to
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students
. When taking part in online classes,
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students
easily
feel tired and
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ignored
from studying. With
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technology
, they can
quickly
access games and entertainment programs
instead
of learning. Second,
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technology
can
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make
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tests
easier to cheat. Along with the development of
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technology
, the applications
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used
to cheat in exams are
also
becoming more sophisticated. When taking the
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test
,
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students
can transfer these data out or copy others' works. This has a
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bad
effect on the
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student
evaluation process of the teachers.
Nevertheless
, using
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technology
can cause
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some
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students
to disconnect from the classroom. Being behind a screen provides
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students
with
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negative
thoughts that they don’t receive attention. This
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makes
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students
,
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children feel lost and may have psychological problems such as depression, low self-esteem…
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IELTS essay the disadvantages of new aproach.

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