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The disadvantages when students study online

The disadvantages when students study online b3PAq

Students have attended classes online recently because of the Covid pandemic. It is said that the disadvantages of studying online outweigh the advantages. Firstly, the young have to spend almost time looking at the screen, which may cause some diseases relating to eyes: myopia, dry eye disease, . . . Secondly, not only their ability to acquire knowledge but also to concentrate on lessons can probably reduce. Besides, some students may not have electronic devices available, so they will find it hard to access this way of learning. I hope that everything will be better and we can go to school normally.

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because
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 pandemic. It is said
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have to
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Secondly
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only
 their ability to acquire knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 to concentrate on lessons can probably
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reduce
. Besides
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some
 students may not have electronic devices available, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they will find it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to access this way of learning. I hope that everything will be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).better, and
better and
 we can go to school normally
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