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The diargame shows various stages of milk processing.

The diargame shows various stages of milk processing. r63j2

The stated diagrame illustrates the method how to produce milk at processing milk plant. It is vivid from the process, in the beginning; milk is recieved at milk plant by truck. Subsequently, before clarification of milk, grading, weighing and sampling is performed. After that, until homogenisation of ckarified milk, this milk is not turned into pasteurisation. Switching to the next detail, pasteurisied milk is afterwars turnedinto cooling process undr the same roof. In penultimate step, the milk is cooled, itis packed and loaded into milk van for distribution to different place. Overall, the process consists of nine steps, initiating with the milk recieving at milk plant and culminating with the distribution to various places.

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diagrame
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milk
 at processing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 plant.

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milk
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recieved
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milk
 plant by truck. Subsequently
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 clarification of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, grading, weighing and sampling is performed
. After that, until Possible spelling mistake. 'homogenisation' is British English.homogenization
homogenisation
 of Possible spelling mistake found.clarified
ckarified
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milk
, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is not turned into Possible spelling mistake. 'pasteurisation' is British English.pasteurization
pasteurisation
.

Switching to the next
 detail, Possible spelling mistake found.pasteurized
pasteurisied
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milk
 is Possible spelling mistake found.afterwardsafterwardafter wars
afterwars
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turnedinto
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undr
 the same roof. In penultimate step, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is cooled
, Possible spelling mistake found.ITISitsOtisirisIrisIsis
itis
 packed and loaded into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 van for distribution to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 place.

Overall
, the process consists of nine steps, initiating with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
Possible spelling mistake found.receivingrelieving
recieving
 at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 plant and culminating with the distribution to various places. 