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Growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should le made compulsory in all educational establishments

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There are two main factors that are contributed to children obesity. One is bad eating habits eating junk foods like's Mc Donald's and drinking sugary soft drinks. Another possible factor could be that nowadays children tend to have sedentary lifestyle. They play computer games, vedio games and chat on the internet rather than paly sport or playing outside. They are overweight, unhealthy and unfit to play or to do physical exercise.

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