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some people argue that the government should spend money on space research while other say that the government should build hospitals. which arguments do you support?

some people argue that the government should spend money on space research while other say that the government should build hospitals. which arguments do you support? KyKPM

Obviously, the government should spend money on both aspects at the equally. However, this topic brings controversies among of the people. Even though l mention below some my opinion on this topic. In my point of view, building hospital is need of the hour of the people, because of the fatal diseases number are increase alarming in todays date. so, it seems to be government should allocate money in the health issues rather than exploring space. Furthermore, it is fact that researching space is less important than building hospitals.

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government
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