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The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of
To be truth-teller or liar was a challenge for people in the whole world in history. All cultures and religions offer people to tell the truth, but sometimes they tend to tell lies for some reasons which most of them are lame excused. People tell the falsehood in order to control a situation. They opine that they give up control by telling the truth. Moreover, they don't want to disappoint those who are around them. They may be afraid of loosing the respect. They are worried about you might reject or shame them. Also lies are assumed to be like a snowball. It is about how lie grows. You just tell a little bitty lie, then to cover that, you have to tell another one and another and another, each gets bigger and bigger. The more telling lie, easier to tell it, thus the liars tell lies more and more. In most situations telling the lie is not acceptable due to harming other people, for instance, when you tell a lie about the price of goods which are cheaper than you want to sell, but sometimes you can give a chance other people enjoy their life by telling the lie, for example consider a doctor who tells a lie about health conditions of a patient whom there is not hope to survive him or her. In spite of telling lies which are unacceptable in religion and culture, the behaviour of a doctor is admirable. In conclusion, no one accepts to hear lies, but sometime listening to white falsehood is better than bitter truth. People should deny telling lies for their personal benefits. These lies, not only harm other people, but also may lead the others don't trust you. Therefore, it is important to be careful about what we say.
To be truth-teller or liar was a challenge for
people
in the whole world in history. All cultures and religions offer
people
to
tell
the truth,
but
sometimes
they tend to
tell
lies
for
some
reasons which most of them are lame excused.

People
tell
the falsehood in order to control a situation. They opine that they give up control by
telling
the truth.
Moreover
, they don't want to disappoint those who are around them. They may be afraid of
loosing the
respect. They
are worried
about you might reject or shame them.
Also
lies
are assumed
to be like a snowball. It is about how
lie
grows. You
just
tell
a
little
bitty
lie
, then to cover that, you
have to
tell
another one and another and another, each
gets
bigger and bigger. The more
telling
lie
, easier to
tell
it,
thus
the liars
tell
lies
more and more.

In most situations
telling
the
lie
is not acceptable due to harming
other
people
,
for instance
, when you
tell
a
lie
about the price of
goods
which are cheaper than you want to sell,
but
sometimes
you can give a chance
other
people
enjoy their life by
telling
the
lie
,
for example
consider a doctor who
tells
a
lie
about health conditions of a patient whom there is not hope to survive him or her.
In spite of
telling
lies
which are unacceptable in religion and culture, the
behaviour
of a doctor is admirable.

In
conclusion, no one accepts to hear
lies
,
but
sometime listening to white falsehood is better than bitter truth.
People
should deny
telling
lies
for their personal benefits. These
lies
, not
only
harm
other
people
,
but
also
may lead the others don't trust you.
Therefore
, it is
important
to be careful about what we say.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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