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The diagram depicts the airport area at present with the prediction of how the airport looks after the reconstruction in the following year.

The diagram depicts the airport area at present with the prediction of how the airport looks after the reconstruction in the following year. 6p80x
The diagram depicts the airport area at present with the prediction of how the airport looks after the reconstruction in the following year. Overall, drastic changes in the size of the airport is expected next year. Furthermore, numerous infrastructures are being replaced and new developments are to be made for the convenience of the passengers. Currently, the airport has just two entrance, one for the arrival and another for the departure which will be increased to four entrance after renovation( 2 for arrival and 2 for departure). Moreover, café in the east under the security passport control will be supplanted by the bag drop thus, moving it to the west. Check-in which is present in the west is moved to the east. Furthermore, the passport control custom which is empty now will have Café, ATM and Care hire constructed by extending few kilometres. In addition to this, shops will be introduced above the security passport control and the present walkway will be supplanted by sky train as the rectangular space in the north will be significantly extended both in the west and the east side forming a Y shaped area for the trains to be incorporated.
The diagram depicts the
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airport
area at present with the prediction of how the
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airport
looks after the reconstruction in the following year.

Overall
, drastic
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changes
in the size of the
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airport
is
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expected
next
year.
Furthermore
, numerous infrastructures are
being replaced
and new developments are to
be made
for the convenience of the passengers.

Currently
, the
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airport
has
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just
two entrance, one for the arrival and another for the departure which will
be increased
to four entrance after renovation
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
2 for arrival and 2 for departure).
Moreover
, café in the east under the security passport control will
be supplanted
by the bag drop
thus
, moving it to the west.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Check
-in which is present in the west is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to the east.
Furthermore
, the passport control custom which is empty
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
will have Café, ATM and Care hire constructed by extending few
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.
kilometres
.

In addition
to this, shops will
be introduced
above the security passport control and the present walkway will
be supplanted
by sky train as the rectangular space in the north will be
significantly
extended both in the west and the east side forming a Y shaped area for the trains to
be incorporated
.

IELTS essay The diagram depicts the airport area at present with the prediction of how the airport looks after the reconstruction in the following year.

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196 words
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