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Write a paragraph to describe the ideal world in which you would like to live in the future.

Write a paragraph to describe the ideal world in which you would like to live in the future. RWEmW

Have you ever asked yourself about the world you would like to live in? I have thought about a modern and green world. First of all, it must be green with a large number of trees. The trees help us to make fresh air, provide a large proportion of oxygen, and make our scenery more beautiful. Furthermore, solar power will be the main sources in this world. Instead of using fuel, we will use electricity from solar power for every transport. It helps us save non-renewable energy for the next generation. Moreover, in this world, we will have advanced technologies to cure incurable diseases like cancer, diabetes, etc. People will have wonderful health with the best healthcare service from hospital. In the real world, there is something that not equal between people. They are still stunned just because of differences. For this reason, my ideal world will be freedom, full of happiness and equality for everyone. There will be no distinction between the rich and the poor. The marriage of LGBTQ + will be accepted and legalized. People only live once, so I hope everyone will enjoy your life in happiness. There are all about my ideal world. Someone said that: “Nothing is impossible” so I have a strong faith that we will have a world such as this for a better standard of living.

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world
 you would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in? I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 about a modern and green You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be green with Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 trees. The trees This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 fresh air, provide a large proportion of oxygen, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our scenery more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
. Furthermore
, solar power will be the main sources in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
. Instead
 of using fuel, we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 electricity from solar power for every transport. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us save non-renewable energy for the next
 generation. Moreover
, in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
, we will have advanced technologies to cure incurable diseases like cancer, diabetes, etc. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 will have wonderful health with the best healthcare service from hospital. In the real You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
, there is something that not equal between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. They are still
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just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of differences. For this reason
, my ideal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
 will be freedom, full of happiness and equality for everyone. There will be no distinction between the rich and the poor. The marriage of LGBTQ + will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 and legalized. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 once, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I hope everyone will enjoy your life in happiness. There are all about my ideal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
. Someone said that: “Nothing is impossible” This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I have a strong faith that we will have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withearthnature
world
 such as this for a better standard of living. 