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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 7pJYb

The diagram provides information about the circle of recycling plastic bottles. In general, it is clear that to reuse bottles there are various steps and skilled workers. The first three steps just base on manpower. Firstly, bottles are divided in a bag and then are put in a wastebasket. A truck will come and bring them to the recycling center to select. There are some kinds of bottles that will be accepted and others will be rejected. Using machines for support is necessary in the next steps. With chosen water remaining items, after compressing into blocks they are crushed to many pieces to clean. Before collecting the raw material by heating, all of the pieces are put into an equipment to generate plastic pellets. The original materials are arranged and preserved into a suitable place. Last but not least, creating useful products such as: clothes, pencils, boxes. . . step will happen.

The diagram provides information about the circle of recycling plastic bottles.

In general
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that to reuse bottles there are various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 and skilled workers.

The first
 three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 base on manpower. Firstly
, bottles are divided
 in a bag and then are put
 in a wastebasket. A truck will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and bring them to the recycling center to select. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 kinds of bottles that will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 will be rejected
.

Using machines for support is necessary in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
. With chosen water remaining items, after compressing into blocks they are crushed
 to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 pieces to clean. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 collecting the raw material by heating, Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 pieces are put
 into Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "equipment".equipment
an equipment
 to generate plastic pellets.

The original materials are arranged
 and preserved into a suitable place. Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not least, creating useful products such as: clothes, pencils, boxes. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStep
step
 will happen. 