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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one lang v.16

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one lang v. 16
With the tremendous growth in the travel industry, some people thought that English, which is widely spoken language, would become more prominent over other languages and result in their eventual disappearance. Having one language trend would definitely promote understanding and economic growth at one hand, however, would also have some drawbacks. This essay is an attempt to highlight both the aspect of this trend. The most evident, the advantage of monolingual society would that it facilitate better understanding. In simpler words, if everyone speaks one language, there would be complete understanding between not only the countries but all the people around the world. This would further promote learning, sharing ideas and the flow of information among people. Another reason that one language would be beneficial is that it would facilitate the economic growth. This means there would fewer barriers and therefore flourish trade between nations, resulting in the healthier world economy. On the contrary, there are some drawbacks to following one language culture. One language signifies the disappearance of other languages and eventually the loss of diverse culture, as different languages stem from varied cultures. The diverse culture is one of the joys this world has to offer, and the reason for the growth in tourism. As people travel from one place to another to learn new things, and if everything would be same then, people would not find pleasure in travelling. This would result in the decline of the finances generated by the tourism industry. Therefore, a big threat to the developing nations, who rely on foreign visitors for their earnings. After analysing both the merits and demerits of universal language, it could be concluded that though it improves understanding between nations, however, its negatives overweighs the positives, therefore maintain local language should be prioritised to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations.
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in the travel industry,
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some
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people
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thought
that English, which is
widely
spoken
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language
, would become more prominent over other
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languages
and result in their eventual disappearance. Having one
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language
trend would definitely promote
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understanding
and economic
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growth
at one hand,
however
, would
also
have
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some
drawbacks. This essay is an attempt to highlight both the aspect of this trend.

The most evident, the advantage of monolingual society would that it facilitate better
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understanding
. In simpler words, if everyone speaks one
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language
, there would be complete
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understanding
between not
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only
the countries
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but
all the
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people
around the
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world
. This would
further
promote learning, sharing
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ideas
and the flow of information among
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people
. Another reason that one
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language
would be beneficial is that it would facilitate the economic
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growth
. This means there would fewer barriers and
therefore
flourish trade between nations, resulting in the healthier
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world
economy.

On the contrary
, there are
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some
drawbacks to following one
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language
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culture
. One
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language
signifies the disappearance of other
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languages
and
eventually
the loss of diverse
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culture
, as
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different
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languages
stem from varied
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cultures
. The diverse
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culture
is one of the joys this
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world
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has to
offer, and the reason for the
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growth
in tourism. As
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people
travel from one place to another to learn new things, and if everything would be same then,
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people
would not find pleasure in travelling. This would result in the decline of the finances generated by the tourism industry.
Therefore
, a
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big
threat to the developing nations, who rely on foreign visitors for their earnings.

After
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analysing
both the merits and demerits of universal
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language
, it could
be concluded
that though it
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improves
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understanding
between nations,
however
, its negatives
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overweighs
the positives,
therefore
maintain local
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language
should be
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prioritised
to ensure a rich
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world
heritage for future generations.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one lang v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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