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the development of telecommunication technology has been able to perform any task such as shopping banking and business transactions without meeting each other face to face what are the positive and negative effects of this trend on individuals and on society as a whole

the development of telecommunication technology has been able to perform any task such as shopping banking and business transactions without meeting each other face to face what are the positive and negative effects of this trend on individuals and on society as a whole GWL6w

Modern telecommunication enable the remote exchange of information that changes the way people interact with each other significantly. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of aforementioned notion in ensuing paragraphs. First and foremost, this development is positive because it is time saving, money saving and convenient. In other words, when masses perform task with the aid of telecommunication they do not have any need to go outside and complete their all task in home as well as it saves money when they do not go to their offices and workplaces than they save lease of automobiles also with this they can reduce traffic congestion as well as all individuals visit to their offices only in rush hour and that time human being suffer from any accidents but with this development they may not suffer from accidents. For example, according to traffic police it has been seen that 30% declination in accidents during covid-19. Moreover, for company its a Win-Win situation as they are getting their work without any additional expenses such as electricity and Wi-Fi. On the other hand, it is lack of concentration and it is difficult to work in home because there are a lot of destruction due to house chores. Furthermore, when people work in their homes and they have no interaction with colleagues and masses cannot exchange their ideas and views it directly affects on their progress. Probbing further, professional work environment provides an opportunity to interact with work of different culture and intellectually ability it is easy for them to complete their work in specific professional environment. For instance, in USA it has been observed that people who do not work in office is they are more capable and enhance productivity as compared to do work in their houses. In conclusion, due to advancement in technology people get more advantages in their work but it also has some bad effects on people's work.

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. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of aforementioned notion in ensuing paragraphs.

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 and foremost, this development is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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because
 it is time saving, money saving and convenient. In other words
, when masses perform task with the aid of telecommunication they do not have any need to go outside and complete their all task in home as well
 as it saves money when they do not go to their offices and workplaces than they save lease of automobiles also
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reduce
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only
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but
 with this development they may not suffer from accidents. For example
, according to traffic police it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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covid-19
. Moreover
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 a Win-Win situation as they are getting their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 without any additional expenses such as electricity and Wi-Fi.

On the other hand
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work
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because
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a lot of
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people
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homes and
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ideas
 and views it directly
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Probbing
further
, professional You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 environment provides an opportunity to interact with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 culture and intellectually
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 in specific professional environment. For instance
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in USA
 it has been observed
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who do not You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in office is they are more capable and enhance productivity as compared to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

In conclusion
, due to advancement in technology You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more advantages in their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 effects on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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work
. 