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The development of technology in the last century

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The development of technology in the last century has greatly changed our lives however relationships have been impacted negatively. This essay is going to discuss in greater detail the positive and negative impacts technology has had on relationships. Firstly, technological development has made it very easier to reach someone across long distances which makes it easier to keep in touch and manage a relationship with someone who is far away. For example, with the help of phone calls, texting, and social media someone is capable of continuing contact with a sibling or a friend who moved cities. While some might argue that such relationships are not strong or meaningful enough, I think that without technology long distance relationships would have been almost impossible to keep. On the other hand, people’s ability to form short distance relationships has worsened since the invention of smartphones and social media. Most Teenagers and adults prefer to talk on the phone or text each other and don’t want to go out. In addition, without seeing each other in flesh people are unable to perceive small details about the person their talking to, for example how he reacts to certain topics or ideas, whether he is lying or not and much more. Although people claim that seeing each other in person is not necessary, body language is still a huge part of who we are that stays hidden while talking on the phone. To sum up technology has had both positive and negative impact on relationships. Nevertheless, it is my view that the negative impacts far outweigh the positives.
The development of
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technology
in the last century has
greatly
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changed
our
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lives
however
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relationships
have
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. This essay is going to discuss in greater detail the
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positive
and
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impacts
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technology
has had on relationships.

Firstly
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very
easier to reach someone across long distances which
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makes
it easier to
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keep
in touch and manage a
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relationship
with someone who is far away.
For example
, with the
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help
of phone calls, texting, and social media someone is capable of continuing contact with a sibling or a friend who
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moved
cities. While
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some
might argue that such
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relationships
are not strong or meaningful
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enough
, I
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think
that without
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technology
long distance
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relationships
would have been almost impossible to
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keep
.

On the
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other
hand,
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people
’s ability to form short distance
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relationships
has worsened since the invention of smartphones and social media. Most
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Teenagers
and adults prefer to talk on the phone or text each
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other
and don’t want to go out.
In addition
, without seeing each
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other
in flesh
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people
are unable to perceive
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small
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details
about the person their talking to,
for example
how he reacts to certain topics or
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ideas
, whether he is lying or not and much more. Although
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people
claim that seeing each
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other
in person is not necessary, body language is
still
a huge part of who we are that stays hidden while talking on the phone.

To sum up
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technology
has had both
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positive
and
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negative
impact on
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relationships
.
Nevertheless
, it is my view that the
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negative
impacts far outweigh the positives.
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IELTS essay The development of technology in the last century

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  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
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