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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Write at least 250 words.: ''Parents are the best teachers.'''

: ''Parents are the best teachers. ''' ox8KX
When we were young, we were usually educated in many schools by only teachers who successfully graduated from colleges or universities. Teachers, on the other hand, are not only those who have a passion for teaching students, but also those who concern about the future of the next generations: our parents. For me, I agree with the opinion that parents are the greatest teacher for their kids. First of all, parents are the ones who are most familiar with us, so it’s easier to give their sons or daughters the best advice. Moreover, they can supervise masses of activities we attend, so they can alter the way we behave if there are any problems. Secondly, parents love us with all of their hearts. We cannot dispute that parents spend a large amount of love on us and they want everything lucky will come to us. This is a crucial reason to prove that they give meaningful messages better than anyone. Thirdly, they underwent a lot of ups and downs in their life to know the outcomes of numerous actions, decisions, and passions that people have and make. They understand deeper than anybody else about life and communities so they can share many stories and experiences that they have passed to us: their beloved children. To summarize, I believe that no one is better to teach us than our parents since they have witnessed our evolution into an adults for half of their life. Therefore, those of our parents’sharings are the best lessons for us as we grow up and become members of the community.
When we were young, we were
usually
educated in
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many
schools by
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only
teachers
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who
successfully
graduated from colleges or universities. Teachers,
on the other hand
, are not
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only
those
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who
have a passion for teaching students,
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but
also
those
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who
concern about the future of the
next
generations: our
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parents
. For me, I
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agree
with the opinion that
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parents
are the greatest teacher for their kids.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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parents
are the ones
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who
are most familiar with us,
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so
it’s easier to give their sons or daughters the best advice.
Moreover
, they can supervise masses of activities we attend,
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so
they can alter the way we behave if there are any problems.
Secondly
,
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parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
us with all of their hearts. We cannot dispute that
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parents
spend a large amount of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
on
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us and
they want everything lucky will
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come
to us. This is a crucial reason to prove that they give meaningful messages better than anyone.
Thirdly
, they underwent
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a lot of
ups and downs in their life to know the outcomes of numerous actions, decisions, and passions that
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people
have and
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make
. They understand deeper than anybody else about life and communities
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so
they can share
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many
stories and experiences that they have passed to us: their beloved children.
To summarize
, I believe that no one is better to teach us than our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
since they have witnessed our evolution into
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "an adult" or simply "adults"?
an adults
for half of their life.
Therefore
, those of our parents’
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sharings
are the best lessons for us as we grow up and become members of the community.
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IELTS essay : ''Parents are the best teachers. '''

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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