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Studying aboard problems

Studying aboard problems PEMyw
The issues that international students have, is mostly no ultimate to count. In addition, they are about to encounter many things that I will discuss the most significant ones that is language and financing. For instance, getting used to having accuracy and good comprehension with their new language in academic university will be not easily happened. Unfortunately, it will not end with first one and continue with lexical recourse that they dont have at lecture classes. The tion fees are supposed to expensive which there are not only many allowance for intentional students, but also they have to work part-time either.
The issues that international students have, is
mostly
no ultimate to count.
In addition
, they are about to encounter
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many
things that I will discuss the most significant ones
that is
language and financing.
For instance
, getting
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used
to having accuracy and
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good
comprehension with their new language in academic university will be not
easily
happened. Unfortunately, it will not
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end
with
first
one and continue with lexical recourse that they
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dont
have at lecture classes. The
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tion
fees
are supposed
to expensive which there are not
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only
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many allowance
for intentional students,
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but
also
they
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have to
work part-time either.
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IELTS essay Studying aboard problems

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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