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after the end of this school year, I am planning on participating in a French class outside to improve and additional knowledge to pass the DELF exam at the end of the third year and get the certification. Besides, I will also try to get the certification B1 English. I have developed a plan for myself to learn English and French to ensure I will get the best result. I realized that I still lacked in listening and speaking, so my study plan focused heavily on these two parts. I need to have an informatics certificate to graduate. I'm going to complete it at the beginning of the last year of university. In addition to study, I also built myself a plan to exercise and lose weight.
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of this school year, I am planning on participating in a French
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outside to
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improve
and additional knowledge to pass the DELF exam at the
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end
of the third year and
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get
the certification.
Besides
, I will
also
try to
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get
the certification B1 English. I have developed a plan for myself to learn English and French to ensure I will
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get
the best result. I realized that I
still
lacked in listening and speaking,
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so
my study plan focused
heavily
on these two parts.
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I
need to have an informatics certificate to graduate.
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I
'm going to complete it at the beginning of the last year of university.
In addition
to study, I
also
built myself a plan to exercise and lose weight.
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IELTS essay Intentions in your future

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1 paragraphs
127 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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