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The Development of Technology

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Since the 21st centuries, technologies are developing exponentially. Several decades ago, people only can interact with each other by using handwritten letter. Nowadays, we only need internet connection and smartphone to interact with others. Starting from this technological era, people started to become more individualistic due to the development of technology. The more sophisticated the technology, the more individual the people become. However, technology has more benefit in our life. Technology really helps human in daily live. We can use refrigerator, electric stove, and other things in our kitchen to make such delicious food. We can also have a transaction in business easily only by using smartphone. Even though there are some disadvantages that technology brings, but we must grateful that technology exist in this world.

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