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In contemporary era ,There is no doubt Student are going in foreign countries for study. Nowdays it become barely for students to go other countries to do study,while there are lots of disadvantages outweigh advancements.student go other countries they gathered experience which they live in To commence with, first and foremost advantage is Universities are help to learn language skill of student which is best way to communicate with other individuals who spoken other language. And also student are dependent on by self. They are do what they want.

In contemporary era, There is no doubt Student are going in foreign countries for study. Nowdays it become barely for students to go other countries to do study, while there are lots of disadvantages outweigh advancements. student go other countries they gathered experience which they live in To commence with, first and foremost advantage is Universities are help to learn language skill of student which is best way to communicate with other individuals who spoken other language. And also student are dependent on by self. They are do what they want. k6KBN
In contemporary era, There is no doubt Student are going in foreign countries for study. Nowdays it become barely for students to go other countries to do study, while there are lots of disadvantages outweigh advancements. student go other countries they gathered experience which they live in To commence with, first and foremost advantage is Universities are help to learn language skill of student which is best way to communicate with other individuals who spoken other language. And also student are dependent on by self. They are do what they want.
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are going in foreign countries for study.
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to go
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other
countries to do study, while there are lots of disadvantages outweigh advancements.
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student
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go
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other
countries they gathered experience which they
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live
in To commence with,
first
and foremost advantage is Universities are
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help
to learn language
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skill
of
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student
which
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is best
way to communicate with
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other
individuals who spoken
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other
language. And
also
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student
are dependent on by self. They are
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do
what they want.
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IELTS essay In contemporary era, There is no doubt Student are going in foreign countries for study. Nowdays it become barely for students to go other countries to do study, while there are lots of disadvantages outweigh advancements. student go other countries they gathered experience which they live in To commence with, first and foremost advantage is Universities are help to learn language skill of student which is best way to communicate with other individuals who spoken other language. And also student are dependent on by self. They are do what they want.

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