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Problems of internet agree diasagree

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Today internet is the most important information source for improving educational skills. Using cybernet often become really dangerous for adults and children. İn addition some of people agree with internet using exatly harmful for mental health of humans. Nevertheless, I not agree with this, because using cyberspace In correctly way pretty good for all kinds of learning. From my point of view 3 major problems of hyperspace. For example, in modern age a lot of psychologiscal fair humans face to face with cyber bullying in social media.
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cybernet
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IELTS essay Problems of internet agree diasagree

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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