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the creation of electricity is generated by using geothermal energy.

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The provided illustration above depicts various stages involved in the creation of electricity is generated by using geothermal energy. Overall, it can be observed that the whole production consists of five steps starting with taking cold water get through the ground and end up with the steam gets in the turbine to run the geothermal generator. At the beginning, the low temperature water is pumped down to underground with the depth roughly 4. 5 kilometers. Subsequently, the liquid gets to the deepest point of the injection well and it leads to the Geothermal area which contains the high temperature rocks. Having heated by the rocks, the water’s temperature increase afterwards. At the following stage, the manufacture well pumps the liquid up to the condensing machine to transfer the water’s form into steam which is the essential material to run the turbine. When it come to the turbine, the new form of water makes it working to powered for the generator to create the energy.

The provided illustration above depicts various stages involved in the creation of electricity is generated
 by using geothermal energy.

Overall
, it can be observed
 that the whole production consists of five steps starting with taking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
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water
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get
 through the ground and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up with the steam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 in the turbine to run the geothermal generator.

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water
is pumped
 down to underground with the depth roughly 4. 5 kilometers. Subsequently
, the liquid This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 to the deepest point of the injection well and it leads to the Geothermal area which contains the high temperature rocks. Having heated by the rocks, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water’s
 temperature increase afterwards. At the following stage, the manufacture well pumps the liquid up to the condensing machine to transfer the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water’s
 form into steam which is the essential material to run the turbine. When it Did you mean "comes"?comes
come
 to the turbine, the new form of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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makes
 it working to powered for the generator to create the energy. 