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Some people encourage students to study university abroad because of the advantages it offers. However, there are many others who claim students should avoid studying overseas due to its inevitable problems. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.

Some people encourage students to study university abroad because of the advantages it offers. However, there are many others who claim students should avoid studying overseas due to its inevitable problems. oEydV
Nowadays, there are more and more students choosing to study overseas due to a variety of benefits for their own future life and career. From my perspective, I believe that this trend can also be beneficial to the foreign student’s home country and will continue developing in the next few years because of these benefits. I think it is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country because after they finish studying, they may choose to come back and contribute to their homeland. For example, Vietnamese Professor, Ngo Bao Chau was announced by the 2010 International Congress of Mathematics as one of four mathematicians to win the Fields Medal, which is the world’s most prestigious mathematics award. After returning to Vietnam, he started to help and encourage aspiring Vietnamese from universities to study mathematics further. He not only contributed directly to the burgeoning field of Vietnamese mathematics but also continues to serve as aspirational example to students of the rewards of studying abroad and then returning home. In the future, I believe that this trend will continue as both foreign and domestic countries will support students through scholarships. For example, in Vietnam it is common for students to apply for scholarships to study in countries like the USA, the UK, Australia, France, and so on. These countries have the means and are willing to support students from foreign countries because it enhances the diversity of their campuses. Additionally, the government in Vietnam encourages studying abroad through scholarships for underprivileged students. They do this because students who study abroad typically return to Vietnam and help push forward economic development, as in the case of Ngo Bao Chau. In conclusion, I feel that there are clear advantages for the foreign student’s home country because of their potential academic and economic contributions after coming back home. Developing nations in particular should invest heavily in programs to send students abroad, besides funding their own educational infrastructure, if they want to have the kind of secure foundation that will allow the country to flourish for many years.
Nowadays, there are more and more
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students
choosing to
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study
overseas due to a variety of benefits for their
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own
future life and career. From my perspective, I believe that this trend can
also
be beneficial to the
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foreign
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student’s
home
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country
and will continue developing in the
next
few years
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because
of these benefits.

I
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think
it is beneficial to the
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foreign
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student’s
home
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country
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because
after they finish studying, they may choose to
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come
back and contribute to their homeland.
For example
, Vietnamese Professor,
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Ngo
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Bao
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Chau
was announced
by the 2010 International Congress of
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Mathematics
as one of four mathematicians to win the Fields Medal, which is the world’s most prestigious
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mathematics
award. After returning to Vietnam, he
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started
to
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help
and encourage aspiring Vietnamese from universities to
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study
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mathematics
further
. He not
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only
contributed
directly
to the burgeoning field of Vietnamese
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mathematics
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but
also
continues to serve as aspirational example to
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students
of the rewards of studying
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abroad
and then returning home.

In the future, I believe that this trend will continue as both
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foreign
and domestic
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countries
will support
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students
through scholarships.
For example
, in Vietnam it is common for
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students
to apply for scholarships to
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study
in
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countries
like the USA, the UK, Australia, France, and
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so
on. These
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countries
have the means and are willing to support
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students
from
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foreign
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countries
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because
it enhances the diversity of their campuses.
Additionally
, the
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government
in Vietnam encourages studying
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abroad
through scholarships for underprivileged
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students
. They do this
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because
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students
who
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study
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abroad
typically
return to Vietnam and
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help
push forward economic development, as in the case of
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Ngo
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Bao
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Chau
.

In conclusion
, I feel that there are
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clear
advantages for the
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foreign
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student’s
home
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country
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because
of their potential academic and economic contributions after coming back home. Developing nations
in particular
should invest
heavily
in programs to
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send
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students
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abroad
,
besides
funding their
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own
educational infrastructure, if they want to have the kind of secure foundation that will
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allow
the
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country
to flourish for
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many
years.
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IELTS essay Some people encourage students to study university abroad because of the advantages it offers. However, there are many others who claim students should avoid studying overseas due to its inevitable problems.

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