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The COVID-19 pandemic has been seriously threatening the safety and health of our people.

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The COVID-19 pandemic has been seriously threatening the safety and health of our people. The society is disturbed, the economy is severely affected, especially for the poor people. Many families have lost their jobs, or their incomes are in a very precarious situation… Especially now, Vietnam is entering a challenging period when the disease outbreaks again with a stronger intensity and speed. The infectivity of the new strain increased many times. After the successes in the early stages, in the past few days, we have recorded hundreds and then thousands of new infections every day. This outbreak of the disease is very dangerous because a new strain of virus is spreading very quickly. . .
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families have lost their jobs, or their incomes are in a
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, Vietnam is entering a challenging period when the disease outbreaks again with a stronger intensity and speed. The
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infectivity
of the new strain increased
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times. After the successes in the early stages, in the past few days, we have recorded hundreds and then thousands of new infections every day. This outbreak of the disease is
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dangerous
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IELTS essay The COVID-19 pandemic has been seriously threatening the safety and health of our people.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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