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The city is worth living all over the world

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Dalat City is one of the cities I think it should live in Vietnam. It located in the center of the southern highlands, 300 km far from the north of Ho Chi Minh City. Dalat city called " a flower city". There are many flowers, trees, beauty view and tall building. The weather changes constantly, the noon is warm and cool while in the evening it is greatly cold. In general, the climate quite mild and cool. So in Dalat city has many kinds of beautiful and precious flowers. Besides, the food here is very delicious, vegetable and food are fresh. In Dalat city has a milk is famous milk that is soymilk. In addition, there are many interesting place, sightseeing and taking photos, like waterfall Camly, Mong Mo hill, Dalat flower garden, Xuan Huong lake. In general, I think Dalat city is the city is worth living and i hope i can have many chances for go to Dalat city.
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IELTS essay The city is worth living all over the world

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