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Impact of technology on our cognition

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According to research of Swing et al (2010), who researches the impact of television and video games on attention problem by following youngsters aged 6 to 12 years old who watched television and played video games for an average of 4. 26 hours per day throughout a 13-month period. Consequently, because of too much use of technology it caused those children to have an attention spans which leads to loss concentration and cannot focus on things they do.

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