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The country I want to visit the most in the US.

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The country I want to visit the most in the US. The United States of America is a federal country located in North America. It is the third-largest country in the world and the richest country in the world. This is also beautiful, with majestic nature and modern architecture. There are many different races here, but they are all proud to be Americans. Americans are very dynamic and new ideas make them the world leaders in many areas of the world. I hope I can go to America and live there for a while. Drive to explore the state on its amazing highways. That is my American dream.
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located in North America. It is the third-largest
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IELTS essay The country I want to visit the most in the US.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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