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safety tips for using monitors.

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In order to achieve eye health when using computer monitors or laptops or smartphones or all types of electronic devices with optical-digital monitors, we must observe a series of preventions. In general, if I want to use my expert skills, I must say that many discomforts await those who do not follow the safety tips. Because VDUs can be both useful and very harmful at the same time. You must associate other parts of your body, such as eyelids and cheeks for maximum safety tips. Also, according to most eye and vision experts, you should constantly use electronic reading glasses. Because these points are very vital. Otherwise, your eye will suffer from the ledge and strain. These problems can be both minor and excessive. So you have to proofread your behavior. Because computer glares are extremely dangerous. So control the seek process of your brain fairly. Because the brain does a lot of resistance in this regard. Let us reinforcement our eyes together with these divine gifts.
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health when using computer monitors or laptops or smartphones or all types of electronic devices with optical-digital monitors, we
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harmful at the same time. You
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associate other parts of your body, such as eyelids and cheeks for maximum safety tips.
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, according to most
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and vision experts, you should
constantly
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use
electronic reading glasses.
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will suffer from the ledge and strain. These problems can be both minor and excessive.
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you
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have to
proofread your behavior.
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computer glares are
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control the seek process of your brain
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together with these divine gifts.
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IELTS essay safety tips for using monitors.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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