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The cost of the international travel is decrease in the tourism in increase the country's what is an advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism of the country

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Moreover
, there is a fear of the crime rate and other illegal activity. To example, smoking, drinking.

To conclude
, it has been observed
 that tourism industry is painful and advantages for the country's; however
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 a few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in my perspective This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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rules
 and regulation for tourist places. 