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Nowadays , many people believe paper books have been replaced by electronic books .What are the advantages and disadvantages of electronic books?

Nowadays, many people believe paper books have been replaced by electronic books. What are the advantages and disadvantages of electronic books? 2rNJA
Books provide us a lot of knowledge. With the advancement in technology people think that e-books have took the place of paper books. Although there are plenty of advantages of e-books such as they are easy to carry and easily accessible; however there are some disadvantages of it which cannot be ignored. On the one hand, there are numerous advantages such as it requires nominal space to carry. Moreover, while reading one can see the meanings of difficult words on the spot. Furthermore rather than having a bunch books which requires a lot of space and maintenance, having an e book eliminates these factors. For example, Amazon's kindle is a great device for book lovers as it had made the reading experience much more interesting and easier. Books which are not available in a town or city can be read on e-books.
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a lot of
knowledge. With the advancement in technology
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people
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think
that e-books have
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the place of paper
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books
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plenty
of advantages of e-books such as they are easy to carry and
easily
accessible;
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disadvantages of it which cannot be
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ignored
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On the one hand, there are numerous advantages such as it requires nominal space to carry.
Moreover
, while reading one can
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see
the meanings of difficult words on the spot.
Furthermore
rather
than having a
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bunch
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books
which requires
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a lot of
space and maintenance, having an e
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book
eliminates these factors.
For example
, Amazon's kindle is a great device for
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book
lovers as it had made the reading experience much more interesting and easier.
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Books
which are not available in a town or city can
be read
on e-books.

IELTS essay Nowadays, many people believe paper books have been replaced by electronic books. What are the advantages and disadvantages of electronic books?

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