Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In all over the world more works are done by a computer including car driving say by some scientist. Road accidents are rapidly increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might think that computer cars reduce road accidents.

In all over the world more works are done by a computer including car driving say by some scientist. Road accidents are rapidly increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might think that computer cars reduce road accidents. k5aAO
We all know that computers play an important role in our life. In all over the world more works are done by a computer including car driving say by some scientist. Road accidents are rapidly increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might think that computer cars reduce road accidents. But my opinion is that it impacts very negatively. Because a computer is just a machine which installed software to work. On the one hand, automatic cars will be driven by computer installed software. It saves our time and people can do lots of work during the travel. These computers will obey all the traffic rules. Children can also go anywhere without disturbing any other. On the other hand, a Computer is just a machine which could not think lack of solutions and skills with installed computer software we just go to the particular place where we want to go. A computer cannot think and handle a problem like an accident. They could not help the others who need the lift and other emergencies. Just humans can handle the accident with their minds. In conclusion, This prediction will affect very negatively rather than positively. Flexibility and overall control by the human mind are safer than by machines.
We all know that computers play an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in our life. In all over the world more works
are done
by a computer including car driving say by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
scientist. Road
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accidents
are
rapidly
increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that computer cars
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
road
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accidents
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
my opinion is that it impacts
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
negatively
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
a computer is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a machine which installed software to work.

On the one hand, automatic cars will
be driven
by computer installed software. It saves our time and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can do lots of work during the travel. These computers will obey all the traffic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
. Children can
also
go anywhere without disturbing any other.

On the other hand
, a Computer is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a machine which could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
lack of solutions and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
with installed computer software we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
go to the particular place where we want to go. A computer cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
and handle a problem like an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accident
. They could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the others who need the lift and other emergencies.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
humans can handle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accident
with their minds.

In conclusion
, This prediction will affect
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
negatively
rather
than
positively
. Flexibility and
overall
control by the human mind are safer than by machines.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In all over the world more works are done by a computer including car driving say by some scientist. Road accidents are rapidly increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might think that computer cars reduce road accidents.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
208 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • In all over the world more works are done by a computer including car driving say by some scientist. Road accidents are rapidly increasing as compared to a past life. Scientists might think that computer cars reduce road accidents.