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The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives.What are those aspects and how have they changed?Is it for the better or worse?

The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed? Is it for the better or worse? V11Q
The major countries have suffered a lot due to the coronavirus. The effects of coronavirus on human beings are for longer period of time. To stay safe against the coronavirus pandemic, it has changed our lives in many ways. I agree to take these changes in the positive ways in our lives. The first benefit of coronovirus pandemic is to maintain social distance. Since coronavirus is transfering from one person to another person by means of physical touch or virus can transmitted through air also. For instance, public trasport in bus, the drive needs to restrict number of persons in the bus as well all travellers need to sit apart maximum 6ft distance from each other. Certainly to limit number of person in public bus is more convenient for travellers. Likewise before coronavirus pandemic all the seats of public bus used to be occupied and moreover many people are standing through out the journey. Conversely, transportation in bus was not comfortable for public to travell. (if a person organise birthday party for his child, he has to be strict to follow government guideline. So, the people need to restrict more gatherness in function. )In addition, the coronovirus is community transfer if infected person may come in contact with other person, then all the people get infected. The second positive change is the healthy food habit. Eating fresh and hygenic food is better to fight against coronavirus; however, it helps to increase our immunity level. For example, the people need to take more vitamin c fruits and vegetables like oranges, spinich, beans etc. These vegetables increases stamina in their body. In Contrast, the coronavirus affects badly to the infected person’s body parts like kidney and lungs. Furthermore, due to healthy and hygenic food habit, people are avoiding outside food from restaurant or any street food. They became more conscious about their hygine; however, they rarely visit restaurant after coronovirus pandemic. In conclusion, the changes for reducing coronavirus infections are took place for betterment of our lives. As a result these changes are good for future. Indeed it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus.
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first
benefit of
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coronovirus
pandemic is to maintain social distance. Since coronavirus is
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transfering
from one
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person
to another
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person
by means of physical touch or virus can transmitted through air
also
.
For instance
,
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public
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trasport
in bus, the drive
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needs
to restrict number of
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persons
in the bus
as well
all
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travellers
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need
to sit apart maximum
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6ft
distance from each other.
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to limit number of
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person
in
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public
bus is more convenient for
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travellers
.
Likewise
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before
coronavirus pandemic all the seats of
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public
bus
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used
to
be occupied
and
moreover
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many
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people
are standing
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through out
the journey.
Conversely
, transportation in bus was not comfortable for
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public
to
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travell
. (if a
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person
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organise
birthday party for his child, he
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has to
be strict to follow
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government
guideline.
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So
, the
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people
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need
to restrict more
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gatherness
in function.
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, the
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coronovirus
is community transfer if infected
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person
may
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come
in contact with other
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person
, then all the
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people
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get
infected.

The second
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positive
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change
is the healthy
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food
habit. Eating fresh and
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hygenic
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food
is better to fight against coronavirus;
however
, it
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helps
to increase our immunity level.
For example
, the
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people
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need
to take more
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vitamin c
fruits and vegetables like oranges,
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spinich
, beans etc. These vegetables
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increases
stamina in their body.
In Contrast
, the coronavirus affects
badly
to the infected
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person’s
body parts like kidney and lungs.
Furthermore
, due to healthy and
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hygenic
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food
habit,
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people
are avoiding outside
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food
from restaurant or any street
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food
. They became more conscious about their
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hygine
;
however
, they rarely visit restaurant after
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coronovirus
pandemic.

In conclusion
, the
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changes
for reducing coronavirus infections are
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took
place for betterment of our
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lives
.
As a result
these
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changes
are
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good
for future.
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Indeed
it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus.
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IELTS essay The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed? Is it for the better or worse?

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