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The coronavirus has upended life as we know it for everyone and challenging institutions from preschool to higher education

The coronavirus has upended life as we know it for everyone and challenging institutions from preschool to higher education R2gyG
the novel coronavirus epidemic has brought exceptional challenges to Hong Kong. The Hong Kong Special Administrative Region Government has responded to the needs of the public and the society in an unprecedented manner. Our objectives are: first, to help businesses stay afloat; second, to keep workers in employment; third, to relieve financial burdens of individuals and businesses; and fourth, to assist the economy to recover once the epidemic is contained. We have created handmade products such as glasses, hats, protective clothing and donated to medical staff at the isolation area near the school. Despite the fact that these are just some simple and low cost products, we made it will all our heart and hope it can contribute to anti-epidemic campaign.
the
novel coronavirus epidemic has brought exceptional challenges to Hong Kong. The Hong Kong Special Administrative Region
Government
has responded to the needs of the public and the society
in an unprecedented manner
. Our objectives are:
first
, to
help
businesses stay afloat; second, to
keep
workers in employment; third, to relieve financial burdens of individuals and businesses; and fourth, to assist the economy to recover once the epidemic
is contained
. We have created handmade products such as glasses, hats, protective clothing and donated to medical staff at the isolation area near the school. Despite the fact that these are
just
some
simple and low cost products, we made it will all our heart and hope it can contribute to anti-epidemic campaign.
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IELTS essay The coronavirus has upended life as we know it for everyone and challenging institutions from preschool to higher education

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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