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Which ones is better village life or citty life

Which ones is better village life or citty life 9rMQp
village life is better on citty life. village life is very facilities available. village life together living joint families. he always share problem each other. village are avaible in the school therefor student go to school easily. And obtainble student playing a ground villages are accessible hospital electricity villages in the road very neat and clean. at night time road in the lites are availible. village are not pollution. people always healthy life in village. it reduce many dangerous deases
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village
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citty
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village
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village
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life
together living joint families.
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he
always
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problem each other.
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village
are
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avaible
in the school therefor student go to school
easily
. And
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student playing a ground
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villages
are accessible hospital electricity
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villages
in the road
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neat and clean.
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at
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night time
road in the
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lites
are
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availible
.
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village
are not pollution.
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people
always healthy
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life
in
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village
.
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IELTS essay Which ones is better village life or citty life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
79 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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