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The contribution of Various economic sectors to X country Gross Domesdic product in 20016,2017 and 2018.

The contribution of Various economic sectors to X country Gross Domesdic product in 20016, 2017 and 2018. KYr5N
The talbe illustrates the distribution of X country Gross Domestic product across economic sectors from 2016, 2017 and 2018. Looking from an overall, it is apparent that, Service sectors showed gradually decreased and Industreal sector experience increase gradual. To begin with, Industry contributed 22 persent in 2016. The number grew by 3 %in the 2017. This sector showed an increase in three year, which more than two-fifhs and half persents in 2018. Service sector was the vital contributor to X country GDP in 2016. However, the number slightly decrease in 2017, and ended up contributing more than a half persent only. On the other hand, Agraculture was a very lowest sector compared to other sectors. This sectors had to least contribution and only represented 13% of the total GDP in 2016. The number decrease by 2% in the following year and increase 3% at the end of the period.
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illustrates the distribution of X country Gross Domestic product across economic
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sectors
from 2016, 2017 and 2018. Looking from an
overall
, it is apparent that, Service
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sectors
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showed
gradually
decreased and
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Industreal
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sector
experience increase gradual. To
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begin
with, Industry contributed 22
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persent
in 2016. The number grew by 3
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%in
the 2017. This
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sector
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showed
an increase in three year, which more than
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two-fifhs
and half
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persents
in 2018. Service
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sector
was the vital contributor to X country GDP in 2016.
However
, the number
slightly
decrease in 2017, and ended up contributing more than a half
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persent
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only
.
On the other hand
,
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Agraculture
was a
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lowest
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sector
compared to other
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sectors
.
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sectors
had to
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contribution and
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represented 13% of the total GDP in 2016. The number decrease by 2% in the following year and increase 3% at the
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end
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IELTS essay The contribution of Various economic sectors to X country Gross Domesdic product in 20016, 2017 and 2018.

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