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The contemporary age is no stranger to the concept of cultural tradition attract lure from all over the to develop local economy

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The contemporary age is no stranger to the concept of cultural tradition attract lure from all over the to develop local economy. In particular, recent years have witnessed a surge in the popularity of. While some people believe that [the opposite opinion], my personal view is that [my opinion]. I will discuss this problem and the solutions in the following paragraphs. Firstly, [topic + reason /solution 1]. As an illustration, [explanation /example]. Furthermore, a research project at the University of Adelaide found that three out of five people believe that [paraphrase of reasons 1]. Secondly, [ topic + reason /solution 2]. To clarify, [explanation /example]. To shed more light on the issue, one of my relatives had a similar experience when she [real life example in the past]. Finally, I believe there are some advantages to this topic. To begin with, [topic + reason /solution 3]. Another benefit is [reason/solution 4]. Considering all the above points, I am of the opinion that both sides of the argument have valid reasons. One should consider [relevant key point], [KP], [KP] and [KP] as well as [KP] when dealing with this phenomenon. In my view, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages and the solutions provided above can address the problem. cultral
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believe that [the opposite opinion], my personal view is that [my opinion]. I will discuss this problem and the solutions in the following paragraphs.

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/solution 3]. Another benefit is [reason/solution 4].

Considering all the above points, I am of the opinion that both sides of the argument have valid
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. One should consider [relevant key point],
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when dealing with this phenomenon. In my view, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages and the solutions provided above can address the problem.

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IELTS essay The contemporary age is no stranger to the concept of cultural tradition attract lure from all over the to develop local economy

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
207 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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