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The Colosseum, a place of martyrdom:

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The Colosseum, a place of martyrdom: Pius V wanted to eliminate from the city everything that resembled classical Rome. The decision was revoked and the pope found a way to include the Colosseum in a pilgrimage route, prescribing the collection of the earth from the amphitheater arena as a relic, as a place of martyrdom for the first Christians. -> the Antiteatro became more famous as a place of martyrdom than for its factory. However, there was an opposite current which presented an archaeological description of the Colosseum
The Colosseum, a place of martyrdom: Pius V wanted to eliminate from the city everything that resembled classical Rome. The decision
was revoked
and the pope found a way to include the Colosseum in a pilgrimage route, prescribing the collection of the earth from the amphitheater arena as a relic, as a place of martyrdom for the
first
Christians.
->
the
Antiteatro
became more
famous
as a place of martyrdom than for its factory.
However
, there was an opposite
current
which presented an archaeological description of the Colosseum
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IELTS essay The Colosseum, a place of martyrdom:

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  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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