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The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion. v.8

The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 8
I strongly believed that everyone should attend university or college because nowadays definition of qualified person has changed and it depends on graduated person. While they attend to college or university, they acquaintance with different people and with some of them forge a friendship. I can make you sure that best time in our life passes during the school and university time. Because classmates become a family for you, one or two become your secret box that you share every moment of your day. First of all, while you are classmates you will spend time to do homework, researchers together. It seems like a boring task but while you are doing it with your friends then it could be memorable time. Secondly, while you are free you will hang out with your peers at night for a restaurant or for having a crazy day. These moments will not be forgotten or never will be revealed to another person. Apart from spending time with friends, university life will make you familiar with life rules. University life full of with rocky moments, and every student who lives college life learn to take this liability, they learn how to work and learn how to achieve their goals. Even small time management can be learned during university life. In a conclusion, apart from harvesting knowledge university will help you to have the better life and ready for life. These moments will be unbelievable.
I
strongly
believed that everyone should attend
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university
or college
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because
nowadays definition of qualified person has
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changed
and it depends on graduated person. While they attend to college or
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university
,
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they acquaintance
with
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different
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people
and with
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some
of them forge a friendship.

I can
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make
you sure that best
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time
in our
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life
passes during the school and
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university
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time
.
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Because
classmates become a family for you, one or two become your secret box that you share every
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moment
of your day.
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First of all
, while you are classmates you will spend
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time
to do homework, researchers together. It seems like a boring task
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but
while you are doing it with your friends then it could be memorable
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time
.
Secondly
, while you are free you will hang out with your peers at night for a restaurant or for having a crazy day. These
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moments
will not
be forgotten
or never will
be revealed
to another person.

Apart from spending
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time
with friends,
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university
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life
will
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make
you familiar with
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life
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rules
.
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University
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life
full of with rocky
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moments
, and every student who
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lives
college
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life
learn to take this liability, they learn how to work and learn how to achieve their goals. Even
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small
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time
management can
be learned
during
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university
life.

In a conclusion, apart from harvesting knowledge
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university
will
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help
you to have the better
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life
and ready for
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life
. These
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moments
will be unbelievable.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay The college years are the best time in a person’s life. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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