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THE CHARTBELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS INOWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

THE CHARTBELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS INOWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011. gGeQD
TO THE BAR CHAT ILLUSTRATES THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS IN OWNED AND RETED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES TIME PERIOD BETWEEN 1918 TO 2011. OVERALL, DURING THE AGES OF DIFFERENT DECADES THE MOST OF HOUSE WERE OWNED IN 2001, WHEREAS, THE LOWEST WAS IN 1918. BUT ON THE CONTRARY IN 1918 MOST OF HOUSE WERE ON THE RENTS AND THE LOWEST WAS IN 2001. FIRSTLY, IN 1918 HOUSES WERE RENTED TOO DRASTICALLY UPTO 79% HOUSE WERE ON THE RENTHOWEVER IN YEAR 2001 THERE IS A DECREAS IN RENTING UPTO 31%. THIS TRAND WAS FOLLOWED BY PLETHORA YEARS SUCHAS IN 1953 68%OF HOUSE WERE RENT IN AFTER THAT IT WAS COMMAN IN YEAR 1971 WERE BOTH RENTING AND OWING WERE SAME. ON THE OTHER HAND HOUSE OWING GET PEEK IN 2001 SALES WERE HIGH UP TO 69%BUT FIRSTLY IT WAS HAVING ITS BAD TIME IN 1918 THE SALE WERE TOO LOW AT THAT TIME UP TO 21%OF HOUSE WERE OWNED. OWNING THE FACTS IT STSRTS BOSSTING IT UP IN UPCOMING YEAR SUCH AS IN 1939 AND 1953 IT WAS SAME UPTO 31% AFTER THAT IN 1961 SALES.
TO THE BAR CHAT ILLUSTRATES THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS IN
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OWNED
AND
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RETED
ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES TIME PERIOD
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BETWEEN 1918 TO 2011
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OVERALL
, DURING THE AGES OF
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DIFFERENT
DECADES THE MOST OF
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HOUSE
WERE
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OWNED
IN 2001, WHEREAS, THE LOWEST WAS IN 1918.
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BUT
ON THE CONTRARY
IN 1918 MOST OF
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HOUSE
WERE ON THE RENTS AND THE LOWEST WAS IN 2001.

FIRSTLY
, IN 1918
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HOUSES
WERE RENTED
TOO
DRASTICALLY
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UPTO
79%
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HOUSE
WERE ON THE
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RENTHOWEVER
IN
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YEAR
2001 THERE IS A
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DECREAS
IN RENTING
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UPTO
31%. THIS
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TRAND
WAS FOLLOWED
BY PLETHORA YEARS
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SUCHAS
IN 1953 68%OF
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HOUSE
WERE RENT IN AFTER THAT IT WAS
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COMMAN
IN
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YEAR
1971 WERE BOTH RENTING AND OWING WERE SAME.

ON THE OTHER HAND
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HOUSE
OWING
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GET
PEEK IN 2001 SALES WERE HIGH UP TO 69%
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BUT
FIRSTLY
IT WAS HAVING ITS
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BAD
TIME IN 1918 THE SALE WERE TOO LOW AT THAT TIME UP TO 21%OF
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HOUSE
WERE
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OWNED
. OWNING THE FACTS IT
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STSRTS
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BOSSTING
IT UP IN UPCOMING
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YEAR
SUCH AS IN 1939 AND 1953 IT WAS SAME
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UPTO
31% AFTER THAT IN 1961 SALES.
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IELTS essay THE CHARTBELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLDS INOWNED AND RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND AND WALES BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

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