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Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience steady growth in its population and it will overtake China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall. (Page 103).

Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience steady growth in its population and it will overtake China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall. (Page 103). KGkR3
the reason why countries still rely on fossil fuels are cost. n 2000, there were more people living in China than in India. The number of Chinese was 1. 25 billion, while India's population was about 1 billion. Between 2000 and the present, there has been a 0. 2 billion rises in the number of Indian citizens. Over the same period, China's population has increased by 0. 1 billion to reach over 1. 35 billion.
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IELTS essay Thus, over the 50-year period, India is going to experience steady growth in its population and it will overtake China. On the other hand, China's population will peak in 2030 and then begin to fall. (Page 103).

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