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The chart below shows the number and age of people involved in various artistic hobbies.

The chart below shows the number and age of people involved in various artistic hobbies. wedKd

The bar chart above illustrates the proportion of men and women involved in 4 different artistic hobbies, whereas the pie chart illustrates the percentage of both men and women across all artistic hobby types split by various age groups. Overall, in the first bar chart, the number of females and males varies in each of the 4 hobbies. It is clear that women outnumber men in all activities, except for sculpture, where males double the number of females. The pie chart extrapolates from the bar chart’s various artistic hobby participants, regardless of gender, their proportions between various age groups. The bar chart suggests that from four activities, the sculpture class is the least visited by both genders. Furthermore, it is the only hobby where males outnumber females ten to five, or two to one. It is obvious that, as a whole, there are more women than men participating. However, painting is the only category where the discrepancy between men and women is less pronounced, at 30 to 25. In the pie chart, it is evident that the total participants are weighed towards the older age groups. For example, 42% of people involved are 50 or over, whereas the smallest group is for people aged under 20, hitting 5%.

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