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Write a paragraph about the most frightening experience in your life (50- 60 words)

Write a paragraph about the most frightening experience in your life (50- 60 words) kgmgn

I believe that everyone has a horrible experience in their life. And me too, I once got lost on a trip with my dad. When I was 5 years old, I was traveling in Phan Thiet with my father. it was a great vacation before that happened. It was a sunny day, tourists went to a place called Bay Sand Dunes. I was at that time standing with my father on the hill, but then I got lost because of my playfulness. you don't know how big that sand dune is, I cried a lot and called out my father's name in panic. For a 5-year-old, it was probably my scariest moment. Fortunately, at that time, a colleague of my father's came to take me to my father's place. If the person I met was a bad person at that time, I would have been somewhere else.

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but
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 that sand dune is, I cried a lot and called out my father's name in panic. For a 5-year-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
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, it was probably
 my scariest moment. Fortunately
, at that time, a colleague of my father's came to take me to my father's place. If the person I met was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 person at that time, I would have been somewhere else. 