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Write a paragraph about the most frightening experience in your life (50- 60 words)

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I believe that everyone has a horrible experience in their life. And me too, I once got lost on a trip with my dad. When I was 5 years old, I was traveling in Phan Thiet with my father. it was a great vacation before that happened. It was a sunny day, tourists went to a place called Bay Sand Dunes. I was at that time standing with my father on the hill, but then I got lost because of my playfulness. you don't know how big that sand dune is, I cried a lot and called out my father's name in panic. For a 5-year-old, it was probably my scariest moment. Fortunately, at that time, a colleague of my father's came to take me to my father's place. If the person I met was a bad person at that time, I would have been somewhere else.
I believe that everyone has a horrible experience in their life. And me too, I once
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, I was traveling in
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was a great vacation
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that happened. It was a sunny day, tourists went to a place called Bay Sand Dunes. I was at that time standing with my father on the hill,
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then I
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lost
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because
of my playfulness.
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you
don't know how
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big
that sand dune is, I cried a lot and called out my father's name in panic. For a 5-year-
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old
, it was
probably
my scariest moment.
Fortunately
, at that time, a colleague of my father's came to take me to my father's place. If the person I met was a
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bad
person at that time, I would have been somewhere else.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about the most frightening experience in your life (50- 60 words)

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
147 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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