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The chart below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. v.1

The chart below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. v. 1
There is no denying factor is that nowadays, computers are taking place of teachers in the classroom the some people consider that computers have to set up in every class for direct teaching while others think that it is not safe for learners. To commence with, in the modern era, it is hard to imagine life without Technologies. The advancement in the technological field makes human's life better, especially in teaching line. Computer helps teachers as well as scholar in many ways. For example, now students easily make their presentation and assignment by using internet on the computer with the method of copy or paste data what's more, they do not have to waste stationery on it. Moreover, peers also use a computer screen to explain topics with sound quality no doubt that listening creates interest of learners in the study. In addition, gadgets like mobile phones, laptops are a basic need of present scenario also their usability in the future would be increasing day by day to illustration, technical illiteracy can hurt children in the upcoming days if they do not know how to work with it properly. On the other hand everything has come on earth with pros and cons so computer are also invented with an aye and nay of their use. One clear example is that the more use of computers in the classroom makes trainees shier to instance, they hesitate to give a speech owing to lack of confidence. Furthermore, they can't improve their communication skill as a result, they do not know how to speak with others in good manners. To conclude, as per my opinion, if these problems can be handled by institutions correctly, then I do not think that pupils have any risk from digital teaching.
There is no denying factor is that nowadays, computers are taking place of teachers in the classroom the
some
people
consider that computers
have to
set up in every
class
for direct teaching while others
think
that it is not safe for learners.

To commence with, in the modern era, it is
hard
to imagine life without Technologies. The advancement in the technological field
makes
human's life better,
especially
in teaching line. Computer
helps
teachers
as well
as scholar in
many
ways.
For example
,
now
students
easily
make
their presentation and assignment by using internet on the computer with the method of copy or paste data what's more, they do not
have to
waste stationery on it.
Moreover
, peers
also
use
a computer screen to
explain
topics with sound quality no doubt that listening creates interest of learners in the study.
In addition
, gadgets like mobile phones, laptops are a basic need of present scenario
also
their usability in the future would be increasing day by day to illustration, technical illiteracy can hurt children in the upcoming days if they do not know how to work with it
properly
.

On the other hand
everything has
come
on earth with pros and cons
so
computer are
also
invented with an aye and nay of their
use
. One
clear
example is that the more
use
of computers in the classroom
makes
trainees shier to instance, they hesitate to give a speech owing to lack of confidence.
Furthermore
, they can't
improve
their communication
skill
as a result
, they do not know how to speak with others in
good
manners.

To conclude
, as per my opinion, if these problems can
be handled
by institutions
correctly
, then I do not
think
that pupils have any
risk
from digital teaching.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The chart below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. v. 1

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  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
7.5
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