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The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008.
Certain individuals believe that libraries must replace with electronic based computers instead of various collections of volumes. Nevertheless, others oppose this idea. Computers are not suitable to every person and books are familiar to each one. I believe in the latter because one can highlight the sentence and all scripts are not available in digital form. All are habituated to textbooks for any references to clear their doubts on the subject. Immediately by looking at the content or appendix page students can clarify their confusion, which is not clear in the classroom taught by the professor and can underline the particular phrase and note down the unique book code for further references. For example, my project is on the functioning of micro controller 8501. In the library I gathered various information from several volumes about the chip in detail which I cannot even find on the websites. Generally, some people have problems in seeing the computer screen like colour allergy and cause infection to the eyes. All book volumes are not available officially in the websites and management have to purchase from the website and few authors do not sale their patent rights to any website. They just publish in the paper format so that people can carry with them anywhere. These days young people are using various applications on their tablet and mobile phone in order to read books, but libraries are essential for the community to reference of various volumes. In conclusion, in this advanced technology world, people are preferring to read stories and news on mobile phones. But I agree that libraries are not for single personal usage, it is for the public and I urge for people to spend some time in reading to know about your ancestor culture activities and upcoming information.
Certain individuals believe that libraries
must
replace with electronic based computers
instead
of
various
collections of volumes.
Nevertheless
, others oppose this
idea
. Computers are not suitable to every person and
books
are familiar to each one. I believe in the latter
because
one can highlight the sentence and all scripts are not available in digital form.

All
are habituated
to textbooks for any references to
clear
their doubts on the subject. Immediately by looking at the content or appendix page students can clarify their confusion, which is not
clear
in the classroom taught by the professor and can underline the particular phrase and note down the unique
book
code for
further
references.
For example
, my project is on the functioning of micro controller 8501. In the library I gathered
various
information from several volumes about the chip in detail which I cannot even find on the websites.

Generally
,
some
people
have problems in seeing the computer screen like
colour
allergy and cause infection to the eyes. All
book
volumes are not available
officially
in the websites and management
have to
purchase
from the website and few authors do not sale their patent rights to any website. They
just
publish in the paper format
so
that
people
can carry with them anywhere. These days young
people
are using
various
applications on their tablet and mobile phone in order to read
books
,
but
libraries are essential for the community to reference of
various
volumes.

In conclusion
, in this advanced technology world,
people
are preferring
to read stories and news on mobile phones.
But
I
agree
that libraries are not for single personal usage, it is for the public and I urge for
people
to spend
some
time in reading to know about your ancestor culture activities and upcoming information.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The bar chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in Australia, divided into three categories, from 2001- 2008.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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