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The chart about the number and the purpose made by men and women

The chart about the number and the purpose made by men and women OwdEN
The graph illustrates the amount and purpose of travel for both sexes broken down into six reasons in a particular European country. It is clear that men travel more than women, for both sport, leisure and work purposes. It shows that going to work is the main reason for commuting for men, while women tend to go shopping the most. The number of trips made by men, at approximately 350, to work, is almost twice as high as that of women, recording the largest disparity. Similar amounts of travel were also found in sport and leisure, day trips, the least common reason to travel, where the number of trips was 70 and 60 respectively. In contrast, shopping was the main purpose of the majority of trips by women more than 250, which is about 60 more trips than men. In the end, both sexes made relatively comparable trips in terms of visiting friends, about 170 trips.
The graph illustrates the amount and purpose of
travel
for both sexes broken down into six reasons in a particular European country. It is
clear
that
men
travel
more than
women
, for both sport, leisure and work purposes. It
shows
that going to work is the main reason for commuting for
men
, while
women
tend to go shopping the most. The number of
trips
made by
men
, at approximately 350, to work, is almost twice as high as that of
women
, recording the largest disparity. Similar amounts of
travel
were
also
found in sport and leisure, day
trips
, the least common reason to
travel
, where the number of
trips
was 70 and 60
respectively
.
In contrast
, shopping was the main purpose of the majority of
trips
by
women
more than 250, which is about 60 more
trips
than
men
. In the
end
, both sexes made
relatively
comparable
trips
in terms of visiting friends, about 170
trips
.
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IELTS essay The chart about the number and the purpose made by men and women

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
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