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the changes of rural areas

the changes of rural areas 73Gk3

Because of the 5. 0 digital age, everything has changed a lot include the rural area. Before, people live in earthen houses but now they live in brick houses. the streets here are improved. Many structures have been constructed. Medicine and education are developed. Instead of farming, people work in new manufacturing. To move out of the province is easier than before because they can use public transport. everything is more convenient than before. Maybe these changes are giving the opportunity to have a better life for people in rural areas.

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