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how do you think of music

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people believe that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people believe that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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music
brings
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only
benefits to individuals and
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societies
. Others,
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,
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think
that
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music
can have a
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negative
influence on both.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Music
is played
in every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
and culture in the world
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
brings
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
benefits to individuals and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
societies
. Others,
however
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
can have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
opinion.
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IELTS essay how do you think of music

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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