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Online social network is a power means of communication

Online social network is a power means of communication Lb873
It true that social on Internet is a authoritative way communication. The key reason is technology is developed strongly so social network becomes popular for people. Moreover, using online social networking can help us to contact with anyone in all situation. For example, whenever i want talk to friends or familier who live far away from me, we can use facebook, telegram, zalo, yahoo, zing me, etc to call or messenger by only phone. In the past, we cant contact with person who we want meet now if they live far or in special situation. But nowadays, we can contact by a easy way, it is online social networking. Unless people communicate by online way, they can meet disadvantage situation. In fact, communicate by online network is used widespread and become essentially, help contact people with peole though they live whenever.
It true that
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social
on Internet is
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a
authoritative way communication.

The key reason is technology
is developed
strongly
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so
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social
network becomes popular for
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people
.
Moreover
, using
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online
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social
networking can
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help
us to
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contact
with anyone in all situation.

For example
, whenever
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i
want talk to friends or
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familier
who
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live
far away from me, we can
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use
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facebook
, telegram,
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zalo
, yahoo, zing me, etc to call or messenger by
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only
phone.

In the past, we
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cant
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contact
with person who we want
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meet
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now
if they
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live
far or in special situation.
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But
nowadays, we can
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contact
by
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a
easy way, it is
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online
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social
networking.

Unless
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people
communicate by
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online
way, they can
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meet
disadvantage situation.

In fact, communicate by
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online
network is
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used
widespread and become
essentially
,
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help
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contact
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people
with
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IELTS essay Online social network is a power means of communication

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
141 words
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