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write an online posting about your mistake 3bRGN
Name: Nguyễn Nguyên Khánh Class: 11/1 Homework: Write an online posting. Re: I made a mistake. By Nguyen Khanh Saturday, October 30, 2021 at. . . . Current mood: I am so regretful! In Thursday, my friend confided a her secret to me and she asked me not to talk it with other friends. However, in Friday, I chatted with my classmate, I failed to keep it secret and then he shared it with others. In this afternoon, she knew this story and she asked me why I told her secret with him, who is one of the most talkative in our class. At this time, I said “So sorry, it is my mistake. Please do not break up with me! I apologize so much. ” but she blocked me on Facebook after that. Now, I feel regretful and I always ask myself “Why I did it, why I failed to keep her secret. ” I wish She forgive me and we can reconcile today. What should I do to become friends again.
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Nguyễn
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Nguyên
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Khánh


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Homework: Write an online posting.

Re: I made a mistake.

By Nguyen
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Khanh
Saturday, October 30,
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Current
mood: I am
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regretful!

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In
Thursday, my friend confided a her
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secret
to
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me and
she asked me not to talk it with other friends.
However
, in Friday, I chatted with my classmate, I failed to
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keep
it
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secret and
then he shared it with others. In this afternoon, she knew this
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story and
she asked me why I
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told
her
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secret
with him, who is one of the most talkative in our
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class
. At this time, I said “
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So
sorry, it is my mistake.
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Please
do not break up with me! I apologize
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so
much. ”
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but
she blocked me on Facebook after that.
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Now
, I feel regretful and I always ask myself “Why I did it, why I failed to
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keep
her
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secret
. ” I wish She
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forgive
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me and
we can reconcile
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today
. What should I do to become friends again.
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IELTS essay write an online posting about your mistake

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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