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The cave paintings of Lascaux

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The article aruges that ensuring a successful hunt is purpose of the cave paintings of Lascaux. In response, the professor redutes this idea by expalining that the the author's presented us little supports. Frist, the author supports his argument by indicating that the subjects of the paintings of Lascaux are large animals that were very important for prehistoric hunters, and there are some animal wounded by arrows in the paintings. However, the professor tells us that many of the animals in the painting are not anilmals that are haunted. In fact, there are animals like cats and dinasours in the paintings too. Moreover, liitle arrows are shown in the paintings. Therefore, the author's cliam rejected. Second, the article puts forth his idea by explaining that there are human figures with animal heads in the paintings which indicates there were hunters. In contrast, the professor refutes the idea of author by highlighting that the animal heads human figures are not shown in the hunting postion. In fact, these human figures are not in the satnding postion at all and are in sleep postion. In addition, there are no another picture around them, which makes difficult to interperate these animal heads human figures. Third, the reading explain that the paintings were depicting, as one of an old belief of many cultures, in purpose of bringing an event to reality. In response, the professor refutes this idea by explaining that the paintings would have been depicted for diffrent magical cermonies too. He explains that in another magical cermony people depict the animal to communicate with their anssectors. Therefore, the author's reason does not convincing.
The article
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aruges
that ensuring a successful hunt is purpose of the cave
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paintings
of Lascaux. In response, the
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professor
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redutes
this
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idea
by
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expalining
that
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the the
author's presented us
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little
supports.

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Frist
, the author supports his argument by indicating that the subjects of the
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paintings
of Lascaux are large
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animals
that were
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very
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important
for prehistoric hunters, and there are
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some
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animal
wounded by arrows in the
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paintings
.
However
, the
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professor
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tells
us that
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many
of the
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animals
in the
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painting
are not
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anilmals
that
are haunted
. In fact, there are
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animals
like cats and
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dinasours
in the
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paintings
too.
Moreover
,
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liitle
arrows
are shown
in the
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paintings
.
Therefore
, the author's
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cliam
rejected.

Second, the article puts forth his
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idea
by explaining that there are
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human
figures with
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animal
heads in the
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paintings
which indicates there were hunters.
In contrast
, the
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professor
refutes the
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idea
of author by highlighting that the
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animal
heads
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human
figures are not shown in the hunting
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postion
. In fact, these
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human
figures are not in the
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satnding
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postion
at all and are in sleep
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postion
.
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In
addition, there are
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no
another
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picture
around them, which
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makes
difficult to
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interperate
these
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animal
heads
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human
figures.

Third, the reading
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explain
that the
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paintings
were depicting, as one of an
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old
belief of
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many
cultures, in purpose of bringing an
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event
to reality. In response, the
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professor
refutes this
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idea
by explaining that the
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paintings
would have
been depicted
for
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diffrent
magical
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cermonies
too. He
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explains
that in another magical
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cermony
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people
depict the
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animal
to communicate with their
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anssectors
.
Therefore
, the author's reason does not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "convince"?
convincing
.

IELTS essay The cave paintings of Lascaux

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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