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Some people refuse some COVID-19 vaccines because they think those vaccines are not good enough. They suggest that waiting for the good vaccine is the best option. Others believe that the best vaccine is the available one. Consider both of these viewpoints and give your opinion.

Some people refuse some COVID-19 vaccines because they think those vaccines are not good enough. They suggest that waiting for the good vaccine is the best option. Others believe that the best vaccine is the available one. Consider both of these viewpoints and give your opinion. PRxBj
Whether or not people should get an available Covid -19 vaccine is a controversial question. Some people would say “yes”, arguing that vaccine will save us from the dangerous disease. Others, however, claim that having not a good vaccine may bring us some negative side effects and even cause death. This essay will discuss both points of view. But personally, I am better convinced of the former view. It is clearly that the most effective vaccination is the one that is currently available. Because vaccines create antibodies to help the body fight diseases and limit the spread of disease, if we vaccinate on a large scale, the disease will initially be controlled. In Brazil, people's picky attitude towards vaccines has left the country with the third highest number of deaths from COVID-19 in the world. Furthermore, The World Health Organization (WHO) has confirmed that vaccines against Covid-19 are safe and effective for use in Vietnam. Therefore, that was a lucky for us when we had vaccine as quick as possible, it can help us to reduce the risk of death to the lowest level. On the other hand, many people feel that the best option is to wait for an effective vaccination. People want to be vaccinated with American vaccines so that there are no side effects. Because some people after receiving the British Astra vaccine have headaches, fever, arm pain, fatigue, even death. Regarding China vaccines, people don't trust this vaccine because China is the first place corona virus appeared. Thus, most of them refuse to get this vaccine. In conclusion, while the fact that getting vaccine helps everyone disease prevention, some still feel that rejecting to be injected. However, it is obvious that having a vaccine assist us in lowering the danger of death to the minimal.
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-19
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people
would say “yes”, arguing that
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vaccine
will save us from the
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dangerous
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disease
. Others,
however
, claim that having not a
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good
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vaccine
may bring us
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negative
side effects and even cause death. This essay will discuss both points of view.
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But
personally
, I am better convinced of the former view.

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clearly
that the most effective vaccination is the one
that is
currently
available.
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Because
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vaccines
create antibodies to
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help
the body fight
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diseases
and limit the spread of
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disease
, if we vaccinate on a large scale, the
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disease
will
initially
be controlled
. In Brazil,
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people
's picky attitude towards
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vaccines
has
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left
the country with the third highest number of deaths from COVID-19 in the world.
Furthermore
, The World Health Organization (WHO) has confirmed that
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vaccines
against Covid-19 are safe and effective for
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use
in Vietnam.
Therefore
, that was a lucky for us when we had
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vaccine
as quick as possible, it can
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help
us to
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reduce
the
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risk
of death to the lowest level.

On the other hand
,
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many
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people
feel that the best option is to wait for an effective vaccination.
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want to
be vaccinated
with American
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vaccines
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so
that there are no side effects.
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some
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after receiving the British
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Astra
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vaccine
have headaches, fever, arm pain, fatigue, even death. Regarding China
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vaccines
,
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people
don't trust this
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vaccine
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because
China is the
first
place
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corona virus
appeared.
Thus
, most of them refuse to
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get
this vaccine.

In conclusion
, while the fact that getting
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vaccine
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helps
everyone
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disease
prevention,
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some
still
feel that rejecting to
be injected
.
However
, it is obvious that having a
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vaccine
assist us in lowering the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
danger
of death to the minimal.
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IELTS essay Some people refuse some COVID-19 vaccines because they think those vaccines are not good enough. They suggest that waiting for the good vaccine is the best option. Others believe that the best vaccine is the available one. Consider both of these viewpoints and give your opinion.

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  American English
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299 words
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